Writing is a hard and rewarding ambition to have. It can be a solo activity, but every writer needs a community to help get their skills up to where they want it. I've been a mentor in Pitch Wars and other contests, helped with slush in contests and with a medium publisher, and published my own stories. My goal here is to pass on some of what I've learned to help others along the way. From query help to developmental reads to sensitivity services, I have a little something for everyone!

I am open to Adult, New Adult, and Young Adult projects. While romance and women's fiction are my preferred genres, I am open to others. Feel free to discuss with me ahead of time to ensure I can provide what you need.

Query Packages:

Basic Query Package: Single pass on a query or a blurb, providing in-depth feedback and suggestions for revision.
$25
 
Query Plus Package: Two passes on a query or blurb, providing in-depth feedback and suggestions on both rounds.
$35

Synopsis Packages:

Type A: Two passes on strengthening a synopsis, with focus on plot and voice.
$40
 
Type B: Having trouble condensing your synopsis? I can help point out areas to cut and trim. This includes some back and forth and discussion of important plot points and a second pass.
$50

First Page Critique:

Great for preparing for contests or querying and wanting to ensure that first page carries the appropriate punch.
$20
 
First Chapter Critique:

Same as above, but for the first chapter.
$30
 
Partial book reads are also available. Contact me with details for pricing.

Reader Feedback:
 
Looking for help on an early draft to know if you’re heading in the right direction? I can read and offer a feedback letter to help point out what’s on track and what needs focus.
 
Up to 50,000 words: $250
Up to 75,000 words: $300
Up to 100,000 words: $350

Developmental Edit:
 
This type of edit will focus on the big picture issues, paying close attention to pacing, plot, and beats. A detailed edit letter with be provided, along with in document comments.
 
Up to 50,000 words: $350
Up to 75,000 words: $400
Up to 100,000 words: $450

Sensitivity Reads:
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I’m Hard of Hearing, with a degree in Deaf Studies. I wear hearing aids, and am mostly fluent in ASL. I’m also Jewish (though reformed). I’ll provide feedback in edit letter form on the story related to the sensitivity area I’m reading for, not on other parts of the story.

$350
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Sensitivity Consultation:
 
I’m also available to review smaller sections of a novel, or discuss the concept. Contact me for pricing.

​Testimonials:

"Laura’s edits and suggestions were prompt, thorough, and thoughtful - both at the line level and holistically. She led me to reshape my manuscript for the better! I really appreciate her openness to answering questions and clarifying her suggestions, as well as her rapid turnaround time." ~ Sydney Bergman